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I think I stumbled across a typo, however. Page 47 - Lanaea shook her head and threw her hands at the boar. "Just have what you want. Consider it a 'thank you' gift on Lanaea's behalf."Besides that, the story was quite smooth and very entertaining overall. Your ideas are fresh and unique, great work!
Should it be 'Laena shook her head ...' instead of 'Lanaea shook her head ...' ?